A: The cafeteria food is terrible in our school. First of all, the mashed potatoes could serve as paste. Next, the meat must be cut in small pieces because it is too tough to chew. Finally, the vegetables are cooked so long that you cannot tell the string beans from the spinach. In short, our school cafeteria serves food that is unfit for student consumption.
B: The cafeteria in our school is offering us bad service. First of all, all the food is never served on time. Next, the meat must be cut in small pieces because it is too tough to chew. Finally, the dinning room is often full of flies. In short, our school cafeteria needs immediate improvement in terms of service.
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现代工农业迅速发展使废物越来越多,同时对人们的健康和生活环境造成了很大危害。
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