2009年北京中考英语作文特点(57595)-英语教育-(192)-21英语网

2009年北京市中考英语写作要求如下:根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

某英文报纸就家务劳动(Housework)话题征文，请你投稿:每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。

提示词语:every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of

得分作文特点:

1.有话可说。

2.审题正确。

3.知识活学活用。运用例如:the more…the better…, not only…but also…, be supposed to…, 还有形式主语It’s important/necessary for us to help…等等。

4.好词好句运用。运用例如:independent, meaningful, furthermore, hence, in addition, what’s more, a great sense of fulfillment and achievement等单词和短语。运用优美句式，例如 :

*I’ll also plant some beautiful flowers in the garden, which will make my parents happy. 　　　　

*It’s obvious that I’ll learn some skills in order to share more work with my parents. Not only do I experience how tired my parents are, but also I gain the happiness.

*As a teenager, I think it’s my responsibility to try my best to help my parents and what I’ve done means a lot to them.

*Compared with doing homework, doing housework is relatively more interesting, so I regard it as a relaxing and easy job.

*Every family has a lot of housework, our family is no exception.

*The reason why I like doing housework is that my parent can have more time to relax.

失分作文特点:

1.审题不清。内容不全的作文很难得高分，例如只写了常做的家务活和感受，但是没有假期的打算。还有的同学通篇写假期的打算，没有出现经常性的活动内容。

2.语法错误。语法错误一直是学生写作的最大问题，虽然作文要看整体感觉，但是错误过多的作文不能得到高分。

3.立意消极。写作不仅仅看文采，还要看文章的内容和中心思想是否正确。

4.卷面不清楚。卷面不清楚会在一定程度上影响分数。